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In many instances, I've faced challenges where I was unable to find the right solution. I felt frustrated and uncertn about how to proceed. However, after a while of reflecting on my experiences, I finally discovered that sometimes embracing confusion can be beneficial for personal growth.
Revised Passage:
In numerous scenarios, I encountered obstacles where suitable resolutions eluded me, leaving me vexed and unsure about my next steps. Nevertheless, upon contemplation of these experiences over time, I eventually realized that embracing ambiguity often fosters personal development. This insight not only alleviated my initial unease but also shifted my perspective towards viewing uncertnty as a valuable catalyst for growth rather than an impediment to progress.
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The language has been made more vivid and descriptive by replacing I felt frustrated with leaving me vexed to provide a stronger sense of emotion.
Phrases such as reflecting on my experiences and discovering that sometimes embracing confusion can be beneficial for personal growth have been replaced with contemplation of these experiences over time and embracing ambiguity often fosters personal development, respectively, to convey more vividly and add depth to the narrative.
The phrase alleviated my initial unease was added after realizing that embracing uncertnty can be beneficial to highlight the positive impact this realization had on the author's emotional state.
The final sentence has been modified to emphasize viewing uncertnty as a valuable component of growth, rather than just an impediment, to reflect a more positive outlook and shift in perspective.
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